Bloody hell...
It appears that a change in POV does work to resolve a problem.
Well, I knew that.
But it's hard to tear apart something that's been on your hard drive for a good six months, even if you weren't entirely happy with it.
Well, I knew that.
But it's hard to tear apart something that's been on your hard drive for a good six months, even if you weren't entirely happy with it.

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I once had to excise an entire character from a story to make it work. I was trying to work it into the framework of canon, with the whole "Lindsey posing as Doyle after Spike got corporeal again" thing, and it took a year of the damn thing sitting there and jeering at me before I realized that, hey, if it was actually Doyle in a one-shot cameo, the story would work a lot better.
The story was finished within four days of me doing that.
Yup. Lots o' headdesking going on there. I feel ya.
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If you don't know her, you should. Go check her out now. Her posts on her life and becoming a professional novelist are wonderful. I can't recommend her highly enough. (And I can't wait to read her professional fiction. Her Harry Potter "Coda to an Epilogue" is one of the best stories I have ever read. Certainly one of the funniest. Here's a link: http://hobgoblinn.livejournal.com/35950.html)
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