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liz_marcs ([personal profile] liz_marcs) wrote2005-10-28 10:54 pm

FIC: Ten Steps to Better Living for God-Kings Through Technology (1/1)

Title: Ten Steps to Better Living for God-Kings Through Technology
Author: Lizbeth Marcs
Rating: G
Characters: Illyria, ensemble
Genre: Drabbles, character study, angst, future-fic
Spoilers: Season 5 Angel from 'A Hole in the World' to post-'Never Fade Away'
Pairings: None.
Warnings: Spoilers, character death(s)

Summary: The Age of the Old Ones is over and magic has given way to technology and science...

Author's Note: First attempt at a drabble fic. Ten drabbles, 1,000 words, written with a little help from my friends. Written as back-up for the Missing Stories Un-fic-a-thon for [livejournal.com profile] spikendru

 


Research Division

Ms. Burkle has suffered an accident in the lab.

The secretaries aren’t surprised. Just walking by the heavily guarded hall to Research Division causes the skin to prickle and the heart to beat faster in response to the hidden threat. Only the half-mad employees in white coats dare walk that hall. Entering without clearance invariably ends in a death sentence, or insanity. No one leaves the division unchanged, not even employees with clearance.

When Ms. Burkle starts wearing leather, dyes her hair blue, and begins wearing blue eye contacts, the secretaries exchange knowing glances: Another department head bites the dust.

***

Lasers

The artifact sings of destruction to Illyria while lesser beings argue over its use. They stop when she picks it up.

“Don’t let her do that,” Gunn warns.

Gun.

The Shell knows what to do. Illyria presses the trigger and a burst of energy explodes from one end of the artifact. Laser, the Shell remembers.

The humans take cover as the half-breeds dive forward and claw at the weapon in her hands.

She allows them to take it, knowing she can take it back when the time is right.

This is the weapon she’ll use to win back her throne.

***

Electricity

The humans have captured fire and light and imprisoned them in wires wrapped in rubber.

Fire and light was once the sole province of God-Kings. Their use meant life, or death, depending on the force of Illyria’s will. Using fire and light to work destruction or miracles was once beyond the ken of mortals.

Now humans blithely control fire and light through the press of a button and the flip of a switch. Fire and light are nothing more than slaves.

The humans don’t understand what they’ve done.

She should have hunted humans into extinction when she had the chance.

***

Physics

Her new Qwa’ha Zahn brings her into the Research Department. His purpose for doing so is a mystery to Illyria.

She sees writing on the wall—Whiteboard, the Shell corrects—and she reaches up to touch the scribblings of evolved apes.

Theorems and proofs

, the Shell whispers to her. Without context Illyria does not understand, even though the Shell knows, what it means.

The Shell sees beauty in these numbers and symbols inscribed in green and red.

Illyria shatters the whiteboard with a blow. You will learn your place.

The Shell laughs that these mysteries are out of Illyria’s grasp.

***

Television

Every weekday at 2 p.m. Spike invades the break room with Illyria in tow and switches the T.V. to Passions.

When Fred was alive, she’d watch with him. They’d sit side-by-side and debate the characters and take bets on the plot twists, like they’d been playing this game for a century.

Illyria says that watching the lives of tiny fools is not fit entertainment for a God-King, yet every weekday she follows him and every weekday she watches.

Illyria doesn’t talk; doesn’t giggle, but for an hour every weekday Spike allows himself to believe that Fred lives inside Illyria’s shell.

***

Microwave

The microwave dings the announcement: dinner is served.

Once she drank the blood of her enemies and feasted on the hearts of her worshippers. She ripped the flesh from their bones and supped on the warmth of their fading lives.

Now her food is warmed dead flesh and dead vegetable matter. It is barely fit for animals.

Harmony opens the bag and pours its contents into a bowl.

Resigned to the needs of the Shell, Illyria shoves a handful into her mouth. She pretends she is crunching bones when she bites down on a popcorn kernel.

She is not displeased.

***

Cell Phone

Wes updates Angel on Illyria’s progress while she watches with her unnerving watery blue eyes.

Angel’s cell phone buzzes an interruption. He holds up a finger to put Wes on pause while he pulls it from his pocket. “I’ve been waiting for this call.”

Before he can flip open the cell, Illyria strikes. She yanks it out of his hands before crushing it in her own. “The Qwa’ha Zahn is speaking. Ignore the commands from your masters and cease your incessant bleating.”

“Socialization is going well,” Angel sarcastically remarks.

“She appears to have grasped etiquette,” Wes answers with a grin.

***

The City

The battle is over, leaving Illyria without foes to fight.

As her vampire digs through rubble seeking allies who yet live, Illyria scans the skyline one last time for forgotten enemies and sees—

—glass and steel, fire and light.

For all the destruction, the heart of the city stands defiant against the night.

She finally understands: the Age of the Old Ones over. There is no kingdom to retake, no throne to recapture. This Age belongs to the humans. New magics—Technology and Science—have emerged victorious.

Is this worth keeping?

Illyria wonders.

From the heart, the Shell cries, Yes!

***

Television Remote

By day three, Spike thinks he should hide the television while Illyria carries the still-wounded Angel into the latest cheap motel room.

Illyria, as usual, bogarts the remote while he makes the half-conscious Angel comfortable on the bed

They’re the only survivors from the battle to bring down Wolfram & Hart. He wishes he could say the attempt was worth the cost.

She settles on an infomercial and watches with a puzzled expression as chipper painted ladies sell cheap salad spinners.

Spike wants to warn her that the sun always shines on T.V., even when it rains in southern California.

***

Car

Spike turns the key in the ignition and flips on the headlights.

“Vampire, I want to drive.”

Spike meets Illyria’s cool stare. The silence between them is broken by Angel’s half-delirious mutterings. He thinks about refusing, but decides he can’t be arsed to argue. He’s reached the point of exhaustion. Why not let someone else drive?

They swap places.

Illyria’s form shimmers into Fred’s as she slides the transmission out of park. “The Shell remembers how, Spike,” she assures him in Illyria’s voice, but with Fred’s smile.

Spike settles back, and lets the God-King choose the road into the future.

[identity profile] jgracio.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 02:59 am (UTC)(link)
Great * 10 . :)

[identity profile] liz-marcs.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 03:17 am (UTC)(link)
They work better as a set. As stand-alones, not as well. Glad it worked.

[identity profile] djinanna.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 03:10 am (UTC)(link)
Oh. That was super. And superb. I just love to see good Illyria fic.

[identity profile] liz-marcs.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 03:17 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you.

I was truly worried about bring "the Shell" into Illyria's inner life. :-)

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[identity profile] invisionary.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 03:11 am (UTC)(link)
Your Illyria voice is scary good.

[identity profile] liz-marcs.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 03:21 am (UTC)(link)
Heh. I did a lot of reading on Angel re-caps. I had a difficult time remembering the closing episodes, even though Illyria did stand out as a character.

Thanks. :-)

[identity profile] 4thdixiechick.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 03:19 am (UTC)(link)
That was great!

I think Illyria's voice is hard to write, but you did it beautifully.

[identity profile] liz-marcs.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 03:22 am (UTC)(link)
Hence drabbles. Anything more sustained was going to get me in big trouble with Illyria.

[identity profile] soundingsea.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 03:25 am (UTC)(link)
Ms. Burkle starts wearing leather, dyes her hair blue, and begins wearing blue eye contacts

This? I LOVE. Hee. Imagine a whole set of randoms at W&H who aren't in the inner circle and are just kinda confused by wtf happened to Ms. Burkle. :)

She should have hunted humans into extinction when she had the chance.

Deliciously chilling.

She finally understands: the Age of the Old Ones over. There is no kingdom to retake, no throne to recapture. This Age belongs to the humans.

So, astronauts win?

Spike settles back, and lets the God-King choose the road into the future.

So. Much. Love.

[identity profile] liz-marcs.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 03:27 am (UTC)(link)
In essence, the cavemen became astronauts and then they won. Heh. Illyria was caught napping.

Glad you like this. Can you say waaaaaaaay outside my comfort zone? Betchya can! Hopefully [livejournal.com profile] spikendru will be pleased with the replacement story.

[identity profile] spiralleds.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 03:31 am (UTC)(link)
These are great. My favorites are Television - I'm a sucker for Spike sucking others into his soap opera madness and Car - the face of Fred, but not always gets to me.

[identity profile] liz-marcs.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 03:34 am (UTC)(link)
My favorites are Electricity, The City, and Car, probably because I sweated over them so much.

Spike done me good on this one. Remind me stick a blood bag in the microwave for him. :-)

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[identity profile] ludditerobot.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 03:32 am (UTC)(link)
I get it now and I'm glad we were useful. Yo ♥ god-kings. Love the piece, too.

[identity profile] liz-marcs.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 03:35 am (UTC)(link)
Huuuuge help. It got me thinking in the right direction.

Drabbles is very hard work. How [livejournal.com profile] sunnyd_lite and [livejournal.com profile] nwhepcat make it look easy blows my mind.

[identity profile] othercat.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 03:51 am (UTC)(link)
Nifty! :>

[identity profile] liz-marcs.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 12:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] goosegirl9.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 06:14 am (UTC)(link)
"Electricity" is my stand out favorite. Such an alien way to look at it! You caught her voice and thoughts perfectly.

[identity profile] liz-marcs.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 12:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Heh. I was just thinking your icon was a perfect match for the drabble set.

Electricity was one of the ones that caused me to sweat blood and I was worried that it was a little "out there." I'm glad you like it.

[identity profile] faithhopetricks.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 06:14 am (UTC)(link)
This is seriously awesome. Somehow Spike and Illyria fit together. I love them watching Passions.

[identity profile] liz-marcs.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 03:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Heee! Thanks!

[identity profile] iyalode.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 06:55 am (UTC)(link)
Read together these are fantastic. Electricy & The City are my favourites, when Illyria realises that a God-Kings power can be had at the push of a button.

[identity profile] liz-marcs.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 12:12 pm (UTC)(link)
I was worried that Electricity might be a little too out there, even though it's one of my favorites.

The City caused me to sweat blood just to get it to 100 (I had to edit down from 125, yikes!) so just the fact it got down to drabble-sized makes me happy.

Glad you liked. :-)

[identity profile] keith5by5.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 07:05 am (UTC)(link)
Love the common theme running through them all. Great perspective on Illyria.

[identity profile] liz-marcs.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 12:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. Illyria's a tough one to write. Drabbles were about all I could handle with her.

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[identity profile] midnightsjane.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 08:02 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, Liz, these are great! I love the way they all flow into each other, and work as stand alone drabbles as well as a continuum. My favourites are Research, Physics, and Car. You did Illyria proud.
Hope you do this again!

[identity profile] liz-marcs.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 12:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Eeeeeep! No pressure!

Heh. Glad it worked for you. I knew drabbles were hard, but ten drabbles in row...eeeep!

[identity profile] ffutures.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 08:47 am (UTC)(link)
Nice - you've packed a lot of plot into 1000 words, it works really well. Glad you went with the buildings as Illyria's "thing to get impressed with". Love "Vampire, I want to drive." Love it all...

[identity profile] liz-marcs.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 12:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you for your suggestions. They were a help in setting me in the right direction. When you think about it, skyscrapers would be something a God-King might be impressed with.
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[identity profile] speakr2customrs.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 08:57 am (UTC)(link)
Magnificent as always.

[identity profile] liz-marcs.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 12:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. *hops off to read White Rabbit.

Yeah !

[identity profile] suaveswede.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 09:43 am (UTC)(link)
Cool stuff. Must join in with the people who mention that they work so much better as a set. Even if several can stand on their own like the first one while others really can´t. Like television remote.

Re: Yeah !

[identity profile] liz-marcs.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 12:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Even in drabbles I can't escape some semblance of a plot. I agree. The last few really can't stand on their own without the others. Designing it that way was kind of frustrating fun.

[identity profile] booster17.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 10:18 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely, lovely stuff. Seconding the set love too, as they do work better that way as an increasingly frantic series of snap-shots.

Btw, should Electricity have an 'of' in it before God-Kings?

[identity profile] liz-marcs.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 12:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Fixed. I swapped "of" for "mere." Stupid drabble rules.

[identity profile] r-becca.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 02:17 pm (UTC)(link)
I love this. You really nailed Illyria, I think.

If this is what happens when you step outside your comfort zone... nah, I won't say it. I like your comfort zone too much. :)

[identity profile] alixtii.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 03:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Agreed. That sums up my own (bittersweet?)reaction to this fic perfectly.

[identity profile] set-aka-ian.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 02:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Awesome, I loved Illyria (my love for Illyria is strangely inversely proportional to my dislike of Fred), and it was cool to see her 'inner life.'

I would almost have preferred Angel ending with Wesley and Gunn surviving and some of the supernatural people dying, rather than the monsters winning, but that's television for ya...

Liz does Drabbles!

[identity profile] sunnyd-lite.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 04:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh way too many brilliant lines...here are a few I adore:
Fire and light are nothing more than slaves.
The humans don't understand what they've done.


She pretends she is crunching bones when she bites down on a popcorn kernel.
She is not displeased.
Double negatives seem very Illyria.

Cellphone: So nice to see a light moment, killer voices.

For all the destruction, the heart of the city stands defiant against the night. How infuriating!

watches with a puzzled expression as chipper painted ladies sell cheap salad spinners. Yup, they confuse me too!

Spike settles back, and lets the God-King choose the road into the future. Perfect end

And, just in case no one else tells you, the title Ten Steps to Better Living for God-Kings Through Technology totally rocks on so many levels that it makes rocking things look stable.

[identity profile] shepenwepet.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 05:41 pm (UTC)(link)
This was a great read!

My favorite is "Physics", with the layers about power and powerlessness.

[identity profile] tesla321.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 06:31 pm (UTC)(link)
I can only quote Spike: "This is neat."

[identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 08:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Those work so well together to form a whole - hard work to get 10 x 100 worders I should think!

I love the ideas in 'Research Division', but all are excellent, and the whole is greater than the sum of the parts!

[identity profile] spikendru.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 10:03 pm (UTC)(link)
These are wonderful! I love the series of vignettes of Illyria's life woven into the theme of technology. She recognized the potential of the laser as a weapon immediately, which was very Illyria, and then I loved how that drabble segued right into electricity. Fred is still in there and understands physics, while Illyria doesn't. Lovely!

Poor Spike - I really felt for him, attempting to watch Passions with Illyria. And I loved the implication that although Ilyria was a replacement 'TV buddy' for Fred, Fred was really a replacement for Joyce. Crunching popcorn and pretending it was the bones of her enemies was perfect! But I think my very favorites were Illyria's cell phone etiquette and the ending was perfection:

Spike settles back, and lets the God-King choose the road into the future.

Love your style, and you did a superb job writing outside your comfort zone. Would you mind if I friended you?

*snuggles and smoochies*

[identity profile] liz-marcs.livejournal.com 2005-10-29 10:17 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm very pleased you like it. I was worried, especially since you waited probably a long time to get this one done for you. I'm glad it met your expectations.

Please do friend, although I never lock fics. *grins* Feel free to route around my memories. (And doesn't that just sound really weird...)

Aaaaand, I'm about to post a locked post because I need to request a second set of eyes for a part in WiP I'm working on. It's probably on the fifth locked post I've had since I started this LJ.

Damn I posted without logging in first. My Bad

[identity profile] chriself.livejournal.com 2005-10-30 02:41 am (UTC)(link)
She ripped the flesh from their bones and supped on the warmth of their fading lives.
Is is too scary that this is my exact thought when dealing with difficult people at work?

Spike settles back, and lets the God-King choose the road into the future.
The past guiding him into the future. Very profound.

I loved these!! Very Much!!!

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