And the moral of the story is : Surprise Blowjobs are bad. *blink blink* "And I'd have gotten away with it too, if it wasn't for that surprise blowjob!"

There's such a definite air of doom hanging over the whole story that you just know something's gone horribly wrong or is about to. Expertly twisted protagonists that you want to get away with it, coupled with a dark, depressing and hopeful ending. What a mix, what a great fic. Thanks.