Not only did I love the story (and I seriously, seriously loved the story) your follow up was interesting as well - I'm a stickybeak and like to know what everyone is thinking - reading the fic and then coming back and reading this gave the whole thing a new perspective - so that is way shiny.
The fic itself is just so all in with the awesome - Willow's section was my favourite, I love the descriptions of how she views the world, the hints about the future and how you were able to convey the energy of Willow and Xanders’ relationship - the section just bursts with emotion. The whole thing held together so well, and your Kenya bits felt like Kenya, which is hard because Nairobi is a tough city anyway and just a hard personality to pin down and you did such a fantastic job.
Congrats on doing just a great job, you rocked it.
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The fic itself is just so all in with the awesome - Willow's section was my favourite, I love the descriptions of how she views the world, the hints about the future and how you were able to convey the energy of Willow and Xanders’ relationship - the section just bursts with emotion. The whole thing held together so well, and your Kenya bits felt like Kenya, which is hard because Nairobi is a tough city anyway and just a hard personality to pin down and you did such a fantastic job.
Congrats on doing just a great job, you rocked it.