Just beautiful. I loved it from beginning to end. have to admit I figured it out pretty early on (I think partly because Xander was just too wise, you know. Just a bit more well spoken and insightful than he would have been. Which was brilliant on your part.)
I think my favorite chapter was 4 - you captured perfectly the deep, deep love between Willow and Xander, a bond that will always be there.
One very minor point - Willow couldn't have visited the National Museum of the American Indian when she was a kid. It didn't open until 2004. I only know that because my b-i-l worked on the NYC part of the museum.
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I think my favorite chapter was 4 - you captured perfectly the deep, deep love between Willow and Xander, a bond that will always be there.
One very minor point - Willow couldn't have visited the National Museum of the American Indian when she was a kid. It didn't open until 2004. I only know that because my b-i-l worked on the NYC part of the museum.