ext_7280 ([identity profile] deborahc.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] liz_marcs 2007-07-29 06:17 am (UTC)

I am loving this fic. Every time you update, the new part jumps to the head of the queue.

Spike's screwed up, contorted face as he braced himself for the great fib of exposition was priceless. And as much as it grated on him to do it though, he sure came up with a creative explanation acceptable to Alex (well, mostly. Faith had to pitch in with a plausible reason for why Alex had to go to LA when only Xander needed to be there and he already was) because Alex isn't stupid. He can connect the dots - just not so much when it comes to himself.

One part of Spike's story to Alex was bit fuzzy to me though: what Xander went a whole year without being told, and his anger when he found out he'd been left out of the loop. Was this referring to the year that passed before he was told about Spike being back? Because, how could "they" have told him? Buffy didn't know Spike was back, and if Andrew told anyone, we don't know about it.

Also, I know that this isn't a shippy fic, but I couldn't but help notice the Riley mention and have got to ask: Do you see Suffy & Riley as being back together in this fic?

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