ext_121438 ([identity profile] lmzjewel.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] liz_marcs 2007-07-27 03:50 pm (UTC)

I like this. I think you could write another story after this story, actually. Especially, with Xander's scarred soul and his reaction to all of this when he does come out of being buried in the persona of Alex Hill.

I like how Spike calls Angel Sir Wanks-a-lot simply because I could see him saying that. And it does seem like a mistake the other scoobies would make not to tell Xander about Spike being alive because of how he would react to Spike being alive and Anya being dead, only to have it hurt him more that they didn't share that information with him. I also like how Alex still cannot connect that he may just be Xander Harris after all. Anyway, I'm enjoying this and looking forward to the next chapter.

LMZ

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