Just finished part one and I gotta say Bravo!!! I can't fight the urge to open the next part but sadly the demand of RL and a Buffy fic for the Buffy Ficathon that needs to be read over are in the way. Will definitely read the rest this weekend, I can't wait for this fic is awesome!
I love how you've written Alex Hill, who I think has a bit of a problem as he sounds like a child, his way of understanding and phrasing... I feel bad for him, just like his girlfriends and Ms. Smyth.
I loved how he met Spike, and I especially loved "Who's Zander?" With Z rather than X.
I'm curious about what Willow had done, though I think I've got enough of the picture from the little hints Spike and Xander are letting out.
I wish Alex can be able to trust Spike because he really needs it, especially after the death of Ms. Smyth.
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I love how you've written Alex Hill, who I think has a bit of a problem as he sounds like a child, his way of understanding and phrasing... I feel bad for him, just like his girlfriends and Ms. Smyth.
I loved how he met Spike, and I especially loved "Who's Zander?" With Z rather than X.
I'm curious about what Willow had done, though I think I've got enough of the picture from the little hints Spike and Xander are letting out.
I wish Alex can be able to trust Spike because he really needs it, especially after the death of Ms. Smyth.