Hey Liz! (: I've been reading this story so far and really enjoying it. Xander seems to have become really hardened and cynical. I'm enjoying how your writing it because you are still making it quite believable for him. Everyone, including Faith, who pay attention to the demons that he's fought and classified look at him as something of an expert and he's still pretty unsure of himself. I liked the line in the previous chapter about how the more places he travels the more ignorant he feels.

I'm enjoying how you've made Andrew still the outlandish story teller. I can definately see him doing that and so far I think your keeping in characterization of him pretty good. You've at least pulled off making me interested in his point of view and thats saying something considering I could never stand him even in S6 and pretty much felt that he took screen time away from characters that I did care about.

I'm enjoying how Xander keeps looking for a fight or at least a dig from Faith and feels generally surprised when he doesn't get one. Anyway, I'm definately interested in this story and reading the next chapter. (:

LMZ