I know. I'm trying to say (clearly not well enough *grin*) that wilde_stallyn's test was made after seeing ari_o's, in a sort of "okay, that passed, what if I up the stakes here" attempt.

I'm aware that wilde_stallyn submitted two versions of her fic, and of the result of each, I'm just saying that comparing the second (actually underage) version to ari_o's submission and response may be instructive and, indeed, part of wilde_stallyn's intent.