That was excellent. I really enjoyed the narrative voice. I don't watch much BSG, but the characters still felt real and full and I got the idea fairly quickly. It's one of the things I really love about your stories, the world is so vibrant and real. When you write about Xander in Africa, I smell the dust and feel the heat and when you write about Sam in the camps I see the tents and the forests and the people... Yah, keep up the good work.