I'm glad to see another part to this story. I think your vampXander and Faith voices are spot on. Xander in particular is a revelation. I have never quite seen a vampire Xander written like that. He's got this great literary serial killer quality that is just genius. Tying it to Jesse was a master stroke.

I do think you need to work on Spike voice a little more. There were a few turns of phrase that just didn't sound like they would come from him. That and your willow characterizations were my only issues. I happen to like Willow so I find the way you've written her to be a little extreme. How about writing her with some of that hard fought wisdom that she has. And she does have it, regardless of what some of the willow haters say about her.

Can't wait to see some kennedy.