Interesting stuff. A bit more jerk-like than I would have liked, but then again, the Xander-of-show-canon could be a bit of a jerk at times as well, so it's certainly in-character.
It really feels like extended wrap-up right now. Sort of like the end of the last Star Wars movie, where everyone kinda knew what was happening, but Lucas insisted on showing it to us. I'm not sure what to make of it.
[quote] “This is exactly who are. I mean, it took me awhile to get that, but I did. [/quote]
Should be 'exactly who *you* are.' and 'took me *a while* to get that,' I think.
[quote] Let’s just say it involved a huge shark God and all I had was Ally and a couple of spear fishermen to help me deal with it. [/quote]
Capitalizing God here threw me off (I thought Xander was saying 'shark' and then saying 'God' as a swear or bit of emphasis). It isn't capitalized in the next two references, so it probably shouldn't be capitalized here.
Hyphenating it, 'shark-god,' might even be better, but would have to be done to the later two references as well to be consistent.
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It really feels like extended wrap-up right now. Sort of like the end of the last Star Wars movie, where everyone kinda knew what was happening, but Lucas insisted on showing it to us. I'm not sure what to make of it.
[quote] “This is exactly who are. I mean, it took me awhile to get that, but I did. [/quote]
Should be 'exactly who *you* are.' and 'took me *a while* to get that,' I think.
[quote] Let’s just say it involved a huge shark God and all I had was Ally and a couple of spear fishermen to help me deal with it. [/quote]
Capitalizing God here threw me off (I thought Xander was saying 'shark' and then saying 'God' as a swear or bit of emphasis). It isn't capitalized in the next two references, so it probably shouldn't be capitalized here.
Hyphenating it, 'shark-god,' might even be better, but would have to be done to the later two references as well to be consistent.